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He Idles At the Break of Day

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April 5, 2012
He Idles At the Break of Day by ~chadwood
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He idles at the break of
day with a hum-song

from his engine, winds careening
along windows cracked, and the

copious chirps of an April bird.
"Is it music?" He wonders - that

ordered-chaos-well-from-the-soul - an
ostinato engine to the stringing

of windly breezes - and the singing,
oh how the singer sings her sun-dust

melody, like angels from tree-lined
shadows on a horizon of blazing light.
Drawn from actual experiences, this is an introspective piece about the art and music of naturally occurring sounds.

As a musician, I sometimes find that the only time I can gain any sort of clarity is when I take the headphones off and turn the volume down.

I haven't revised this at all, so for now it could be subject to edits.

Yes, I'm aware that "windly" isn't word. It's there to evoke a notion, and for the sound.
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RestlessSands's avatar
reallylike first three stanzas - been there - think most of us have :thumbsup: